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Cleaning out my dA~
This week has been nice, very little homework :] (except French, which is just a nuisance these days) >_>
Andy says my story is too mechanical (It's going in scraps now, just fyi) but I'm not sure how to fix it because it was just the first chapter and explanations were kind of in order..
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This week has been nice, very little homework :] (except French, which is just a nuisance these days) >_>
Andy says my story is too mechanical (It's going in scraps now, just fyi) but I'm not sure how to fix it because it was just the first chapter and explanations were kind of in order..
<3
Life Goes On
And school's almost over. Just a few more weeks to suffer through. Then maybe I'll get back to my sins and my story. I'm still keeping my goal of finishing in October.
And hopefully the district will let us teach elementary schoolers about music(:
Something.. changed o.o
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You Know
How I love you :]<3
wtf
is this?! www.cleverbot.com
bahaha so creepy!
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Dear Shuichi,
I don't really know how to tell you this, but I'm in love with your sister. I think I realized it when we skinny dipped in your closet and I saw you ignore my father. I'm sure you're masochistic enough to understand that I'm allergic to your hamster. I'm returning your ring to you, but I'll keep your photo as a memory. You should also know that I told my psychiatrist about the apartment building.
Go burn,
Yuuki
Do This:
I don't really know how to tell you this, but ___1___. I think I realized it ___2___ ___3___ and I saw you ___4___ ___5___. I'm sure you're ___6___ enough to understand ___7___. I'm returning ___8___ to yo
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I was just saying, try to make it all subtle. Like, have something happen that might not be understood, and then explain it. It'll add fluidity and length to the story.